2011年5月4日 星期三

Process - revised giving reasons(4)


My favorite food are apples because they are good to our health if we eat apples every day. As a proverb goes, “An apple a day, keeps the doctor away.” Thus, if we eat apples every day, our bodies will become healthier.  Furthermore, if we are hungry, eating an apple can make us feel replete. Especially if we are going on a diet, eating apples a day is a good choice for us during that period of time. Last but not the least, the price of apples is friendly; therefore, we can get them easily in our daily life. For above reasons, that's why I am crazy about eating apples

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