2011年5月25日 星期三

Expressing on Opinion-2

I oppose that meeting strangers through online dating sites for some reasons. First, there are many criminals seeking the children, especially teenagers, to chat with them and plan to cheat their money. Chatting with the children for several days, these criminals will take the opportunity to ask them for money. In general, many people would forget their common sense and give them money. Second, some criminals will ask them out until they know each other well for raping or even murder them. Out of curiosity, the children may promise to go out with them. Eventually, they lost not only their money, but put no truth in anyone. Due to all of the two reasons, one must conclude that we can’t be too careful to meet people on the internet.

4 則留言:

  1. truth? trust?
    Internet要大寫!!
    還可以囉

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  2. 第三行後面那一句
    應該可以加個after

    大致上還不錯

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  3. First, there are many criminals seeking the children, especially teenagers

    尋找小孩子,尤其是青少年,這樣有點怪怪的吧

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