I would hire Debra Fines for the job because the following reasons. First, Debra has more education than Lynn . I think Debra may have more knowledge than Lynn . Second, Debra has lots of employment experiences, while Lynn doesn’t. Unlike Lynn , Debra is also a competitive swimmer. Finally, Lynn got the Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, however, Debra published the English Verb Tenses and Shortman Publishing Company in 2006. For these reasons, I think Debra is qualified and suitable for the job. That’s why I hire Debra for the English instructor.
我覺得主題句應該要提一下這兩個人因為不然突然冒出一個LYNN有點怪怪的
回覆刪除主題句可以多一點哦:)
回覆刪除I would hire Debra Fines for the job because the following reasons ->because of
回覆刪除Unlike Lynn, Debra is also a competitive swimmer 感覺這句有點突然
你主題句寫完後
回覆刪除如果再用多一點小點去支持就更棒了