2011年5月18日 星期三

Contrasting-2

        I would hire Debra Fines for the job because the following reasons. First, Debra has more education than Lynn. I think Debra may have more knowledge than Lynn. Second, Debra has lots of employment experiences, while Lynn doesn’t. Unlike Lynn, Debra is also a competitive swimmer. Finally, Lynn got the Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, however, Debra published the English Verb Tenses and Shortman Publishing Company in 2006. For these reasons, I think Debra is qualified and suitable for the job. That’s why I hire Debra for the English instructor. 

4 則留言:

  1. 我覺得主題句應該要提一下這兩個人因為不然突然冒出一個LYNN有點怪怪的

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  2. I would hire Debra Fines for the job because the following reasons ->because of

    Unlike Lynn, Debra is also a competitive swimmer 感覺這句有點突然

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  3. 你主題句寫完後
    如果再用多一點小點去支持就更棒了

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