We must obey the school rules. Although plenty of students insist that wearing uniforms isn’t necessary, I strongly think that students should wear uniforms when they go to school every day. Firstly, I suppose that wearing uniforms would make the students look neat and comfortable. That way, teachers can manage them easily and efficiently. Secondly, an uniform is also a symbol of a school. That is, if they wear uniforms, everyone will know which school they belong to. When the students wear uniforms, they have to control themselves because they represent their school. Finally, wearing uniform can save not only money but the time they spend choosing their clothes every morning. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I suppose that wearing uniforms is necessary.
主題句有點突然!!
回覆刪除你說 我們必須守校規
但沒說出主要的論點是 是否穿制服
其他還好
穿制服應該不會比較舒服
回覆刪除內容還蠻充足的
然後阿
既然塔塔把制服說的這麼重要
你也要好好穿制服喔
不要半套了:)
主題句是不是直接點出制服就好 ,校規應該沒什麼關係
回覆刪除然後沒了
不錯阿很棒很棒!
回覆刪除:D