2011年5月18日 星期三

Contrasting-1

        Jhu and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus on the Internet. Finally, I decide to choose Fairfax Apartment because the two apartments are different in many ways. Firstly, there are two large bedrooms in Fairfax Apartment, but there is only one bedroom in CAMPUS APTS. Secondly, pets are allowed in CAMPUS APTS, while it’s not allowed in Fairfax Apartment. That way, I won’t be disturbed by the noise made from the dogs. Unlike CAMPUS APTS, Fairfax Apartment is furnished and air conditioned. Finally, though the rent of the Fairfax Apartment for a month is more expensive than CAMPUS APTS, I think the facilities in Fairfax Apartment is suitable for me. 

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  1. Finally, I decide to choose Fairfax Apartment because the two apartments are different in many wayS 這句用BECAUSE連接怪怪的 因為我覺得好像沒啥因果關係 然後既然是已經決定了 DECIDE應該用完成式或過去式
    其他都還OK!

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  2. I decide to choose Fairfax Apartment because the two apartments are different in many ways...這個有跳躍性思考XD

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