Expressing on Opinion-2

I oppose that meeting strangers through online dating sites for some reasons. First, there are many criminals seeking the children, especially teenagers, to chat with them and plan to cheat their money. Chatting with the children for several days, these criminals will take the opportunity to ask them for money. In general, many people would forget their common sense and give them money. Second, some criminals will ask them out until they know each other well for raping or even murder them. Out of curiosity, the children may promise to go out with them. Eventually, they lost not only their money, but put no truth in anyone. Due to all of the two reasons, one must conclude that we can’t be too careful to meet people on the internet.

Expressing an Opinion-1

We must obey the school rules. Although plenty of students insist that wearing uniforms isn’t necessary, I strongly think that students should wear uniforms when they go to school every day. Firstly, I suppose that wearing uniforms would make the students look neat and comfortable. That way, teachers can manage them easily and efficiently. Secondly, an uniform is also a symbol of a school. That is, if they wear uniforms, everyone will know which school they belong to. When the students wear uniforms, they have to control themselves because they represent their school. Finally, wearing uniform can save not only money but the time they spend choosing their clothes every morning. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I suppose that wearing uniforms is necessary.

Comparing-2 revised

        There are some similarities between the two men, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson. First, both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson played an important role in the American Revolution. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson studied and practiced law. Third, John Adams was a signer of Declaration of Independence, and so was Thomas Jefferson. In addition, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson had ever been the president of United States. They also delegated to the Continental Congress. To my surprise, both of them died on July 4, 1826. To sum up, the two men whom I mention above are so alike that I often get mix up.  

Comparing-1 revised

      There are some similar information that the two drivers’ licenses provide. First, Stephanie Brooks’s eyes color is brown. Likewise, Ann Friedman’s eyes color is brown. Second, Stephanie Brooks is as tall as Ann Friedman. Third, both Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman have black hair. Coincidentally, Stephanie Brooks’s birthday is the same as Ann Friedman. How amazing it is!

Contrasting-2

        I would hire Debra Fines for the job because the following reasons. First, Debra has more education than Lynn. I think Debra may have more knowledge than Lynn. Second, Debra has lots of employment experiences, while Lynn doesn’t. Unlike Lynn, Debra is also a competitive swimmer. Finally, Lynn got the Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, however, Debra published the English Verb Tenses and Shortman Publishing Company in 2006. For these reasons, I think Debra is qualified and suitable for the job. That’s why I hire Debra for the English instructor. 

Contrasting-1

        Jhu and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus on the Internet. Finally, I decide to choose Fairfax Apartment because the two apartments are different in many ways. Firstly, there are two large bedrooms in Fairfax Apartment, but there is only one bedroom in CAMPUS APTS. Secondly, pets are allowed in CAMPUS APTS, while it’s not allowed in Fairfax Apartment. That way, I won’t be disturbed by the noise made from the dogs. Unlike CAMPUS APTS, Fairfax Apartment is furnished and air conditioned. Finally, though the rent of the Fairfax Apartment for a month is more expensive than CAMPUS APTS, I think the facilities in Fairfax Apartment is suitable for me. 

Comparing-3

       I have two brothers, who are Mark and Pete. They are identical twins, thus, I often get mix up. For one thing, their physical appearances look exactly alike. Mark is tall and thin with curly brown hair. Likewise, Pete is a tall and thin boy with curly hair. They also have the same unusual blue-green eye color. Moreover, Mark wears glasses and so does Pete. Finally, both Mark and Pete have dimple. When they are smiling at the same time, I almost couldn’t tell who is Mark and who is Pete. Though we live together every day, I often still get mix up.

Process - revised giving reasons(4)

My favorite food are apples because they are good to our health if we eat apples every day. As a proverb goes, “An apple a day, keeps the doctor away.” Thus, if we eat apples every day, our bodies will become healthier.  Furthermore, if we are hungry, eating an apple can make us feel replete. Especially if we are going on a diet, eating apples a day is a good choice for us during that period of time. Last but not the least, the price of apples is friendly; therefore, we can get them easily in our daily life. For above reasons, that's why I am crazy about eating apples