Discussing Cause-1 (revised)

I’ve decided to accept a job for several reasons. First of all, I needn’t ask my mother to give me money anymore if I earn money on my own. In this way, my mother needn’t work so hard to support our family. Another reason is that I want to make good use of my time after I graduated from senior school. I won’t feel bored if I have my daily target. Moreover, I can use money I earn freely if I get the pay. I can buy whatever I want or even plan to take a trip to the countries where I want to visit. The reasons above are why I made this decision, and I hope it is the right one.