2011年6月1日 星期三

Contrasting 2 (revised)

      There are two people, called Debra and Lynn, want this job. Eventually, I decide to hire Debra Fines for the job because of the following reasons. First, Debra has more education than Lynn. I think Debra may have more knowledge than Lynn. Second, Debra has lots of employment experiences, while Lynn doesn’t. Unlike Lynn, Debra is also a competitive swimmer. Finally, Lynn got the Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, however, Debra published the English Verb Tenses and Shortman Publishing Company in 2006. For these reasons, I think Debra is qualified and suitable for the job. That’s why I hire Debra for the English instructor. 
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  1. 金龍2011年6月9日 晚上8:16

    1.There are two people, called Debra and Lynn, want this job.
    -->Two people, called Debra and Lynn, intend to apply for this job.

    2.Finally, Lynn got the Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004, however, Debra published the English Verb Tenses and Shortman Publishing Company in 2006.
    -->Finally, Lynn got the Excellence in Teaching Award in 2004; however, Debra published "English Verb Tenses" in Shortman Publishing Company in 2006.

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