Staying healthy can be an easy thing for you. The first thing you should do is to exercise regularly. For example, you can go to a gym or go swimming three days a weak. By means of these exercise, your health will become stronger. The second thing is to keep a balanced diet. You should eat vegetables and fruits rather than eat meat every day. Last but not the least, keeping a good mood is also a good way to stay your health. As the saying goes,” Laughter is the best medicine.” If you follow these easy ways which are mention above, you can also be a healthy man.
keeping a good mood is also a good way to stay your health
回覆刪除我覺得這句可以打 stay healthy 就好
If you follow these easy ways which are mention above
我認為應該用 method 不要用way 會比較好一點
然後這篇很棒 還可以舉出諺語 也很順
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回覆刪除還不錯!
第一句的 for you 應該不用吧
回覆刪除weak=>week
health will become stronger health 用stronger是不是怪的呢?
keeping a good mood a應該也不用
which are mention above mention 是動詞吧?這裡應該用被動
weak...week
回覆刪除還有名言真棒!^^
week!!!!
回覆刪除很順暢!!