2011年4月6日 星期三

How to stay healthy

Staying healthy can be an easy thing for you. The first thing you should do is to exercise regularly. For example, you can go to a gym or go swimming three days a weak. By means of these exercise, your health will become stronger. The second thing is to keep a balanced diet. You should eat vegetables and fruits rather than eat meat every day. Last but not the least, keeping a good mood is also a good way to stay your health. As the saying goes,” Laughter is the best medicine.” If you follow these easy ways which are mention above, you can also be a healthy man.

5 則留言:

  1. keeping a good mood is also a good way to stay your health
    我覺得這句可以打 stay healthy 就好

    If you follow these easy ways which are mention above
    我認為應該用 method 不要用way 會比較好一點

    然後這篇很棒 還可以舉出諺語 也很順

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  2. 第一句的 for you 應該不用吧

    weak=>week

    health will become stronger health 用stronger是不是怪的呢?
    keeping a good mood a應該也不用

    which are mention above mention 是動詞吧?這裡應該用被動

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