My favorite food is apple because it is good to our health if we eat apples every day. As a proverb goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Thus, if we eat apples every day, our health will become healthier. Furthermore, if we are hungry, eating an apple can make us feel satiate. Especially if we are going on a diet, eating apples a day can do good to our health during that period of time. Last but not the least, the price of apples is friendly; therefore, we can get them easily in our daily life. For above reasons, that's why I am crazy about eating apples.
our health will become healthier health改成body之類的吧
回覆刪除eating apples a day every day?還是直接把a day去掉
is good to 改成 is good for
回覆刪除I am crazy about eating apples.
你也太變態
An apple a day keeps the doctor away
回覆刪除中間要逗號
our health will become healthier
我認為主詞用人 不要用health 很怪
你怎麼健康的句子一直重複出現 也要打一些不一樣的優點
My favorite food is apple ...感覺APPLE 好像要單數或複數..
回覆刪除make us feel satiate...satiate改成replete比較好哦因為要形容詞吧?
瘋狂的吃蘋果吧!XDD