describing a person revised

 

     My friend and I took a trip to the US. Yesterday we went shopping on the street. Suddenly, she told me she wanted to go to bathroom and asked me to wait for her for ten minutes. Yet, thirty minutes had passed, she didn’t come back. I was worried about her. Her name is Candy Chen. She is medium height and average weight. Moreover, her hair is black and curly and she doesn’t wear glasses. In addition, there is a big mole on her right cheek. You can also notice her immediately by her scar on her nose. Please call me as soon as possible if you see her.

Comparing2

        There are some similarities between the two men, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson. First, both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson played an important role in the American Revolution. Second, John Adams studied and practiced law. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson studied and practiced law. Third, John Adams was a signer of Declaration of Independence, and so did Thomas Jefferson. In addition, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson had ever been the president of United States. They also delegated to the Continental Congress. To my surprise, both of them died on July 4, 1826. To sum up, the two men whom I mention above are so alike that I often get mix up.   

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        There are some similar features that the two people have. First, Stephanie Brooks’s eyes color is brown. Likewise, Ann Friedman’s eyes color is brown. Second, Stephanie Brooks is as tall as Ann Friedman. Third, both Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman have black hair. Coincidentally, Stephanie Brooks’s birthday is the same as Ann Friedman.

Describing a Process– 4 (How to stay healthy) revised

Staying healthy can be an easy thing for you. The first thing you should do is to exercise regularly. For example, you can go to a gym or go swimming three times a week. By means of these exercise, your health will become better. The second thing is to keep a balanced diet. You should eat vegetables and fruits rather than meat every day. Last but not the least, keeping a good mood is also a good way to stay your health. As the saying goes,” Laughter is the best medicine.” If you follow these easy methods which are mentioned above, you can also be a healthy man.

Giving Reasons - My favorite food

 

My favorite food is apple because it is good to our health if we eat apples every day. As a proverb goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Thus, if we eat apples every day, our health will become healthier.  Furthermore, if we are hungry, eating an apple can make us feel satiate. Especially if we are going on a diet, eating apples a day can do good to our health during that period of time. Last but not the least, the price of apples is friendly; therefore, we can get them easily in our daily life. For above reasons, that's why I am crazy about eating apples.

describing a person

       My friend and I took a trip to the US. Yesterday we went shopping on the street. Suddenly, she told me she wanted to go to bathroom and asked me wait for her for ten minutes. Yet, thirty minutes had passed, and she didn’t come back. I was worry about her. Her name is Candy. She is medium height and average weight. Moreover, her hair is black and curly and she doesn’t wear glasses. In addition, there is a big mole on her right cheek. You can also notice her immediately about her scar on her nose. Please call me as soon as possible if you see her.

How to stay healthy

Staying healthy can be an easy thing for you. The first thing you should do is to exercise regularly. For example, you can go to a gym or go swimming three days a weak. By means of these exercise, your health will become stronger. The second thing is to keep a balanced diet. You should eat vegetables and fruits rather than eat meat every day. Last but not the least, keeping a good mood is also a good way to stay your health. As the saying goes,” Laughter is the best medicine.” If you follow these easy ways which are mention above, you can also be a healthy man.